Tuesday, December 10, 2013

Day 10-“He grit his teeth and bore the pain…” 55 word story

He grit his teeth and bore the pain…

He loved her . She loved him.  He told his parents. She asked her parents.Her parents refused. Religions didn't match. Egos clashed.The girl had to choose.She didn't choose. It was clear.It was 25 years versus 25 months.He grit his teeth and bore the pain.He would wait for the next birth.
My first attempt at a 55 word fiction. Actually my first attempt at fiction. I loved doing it. This is for the 
Theme as given by my favorite FB blogging group 'Marathon Blogging'


3 comments:

  1. Love this.,,, 55 ers are so powerful isn't it?

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  2. Nice take on the prompt :)

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Key down what you feel , good or bad :) I love reading it